Sunday, February 22, 2009

Journal #2

1.Wicked is told in third person by a narrator. At the moment, the story is being told from Melena’s point of view.2.The point of view is effective because it allows you to see the story from your own point of view because you can see everyone else’s thoughts and determine what will happen next in the story.

2.The point of view is effective because it allows you to see the story from your own point of view because you can see everyone else’s thoughts and determine what will happen next in the story.

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Mommy was making breakfast but it’s too bad I can’t have some! I think I will cheer mommy up. I think I will sing to mommy! I start to sing a sweet little song, one wit out a melody, just a song that sounds like a dream. I feel mommy stop moving, I guess she likes my song. I’ve done this before and I hope that mommy doesn’t mind. I think that I’ll keeping singing so that I can keep mommy happy. Oh mommy’s moving again, I guess she is talking to someone, I hope its daddy. I like my daddy! I feel some food slowly start to move it way to her stomach and I know that she’s is eating. I really hope that mommy doesn’t throw up again; she’s been doing that a lot lately! I start to sing the chorus of my song but I think that I’m distracting mommy. Uh oh I think daddy said something bad because mommy is getting mad! I hear a crash against something hard. I look around in my dark cramped room...if it’s even a room. I stretch out my arms but I hit a wall, sorry mommy! I feel mommy flinch and hurry somewhere. I hear a door close and she leans over. Oh no she’s going to throw up again! I start to sing again and hope that this will calm her down a bit.

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